Help Review my Petition for Certiorari :)

Discussion in 'Aviation Passenger Security in the USA' started by Affection, May 15, 2012.

  1. Affection

    Affection Original Member

    My document asking the U.S. Supreme Court to hear my case is published at my blog (in sig). If you'd like to help look it over and provide feedback, I'd love to hear it.

    The deadline is end of tomorrow, as it goes to the printer on Thursday morning. So, I'm posting in this forum so that people will see it since it's time-sensitive -- if the mods could move the thread to the correct forum after Thursday morning, that would be awesome. :)

    --Jon
     
  2. DeafBlonde

    DeafBlonde Original Member

    This nit-pickey gramatical correction is at the top of Page 4 of your petition.

    Another nit-pickey gramatical correction on Page 4.

    Otherwise, EXCELLENT!!! :D

    (Sic 'em, Jon!)
     
  3. Fisher1949

    Fisher1949 Original Member Coach

    This is terrific.
     
  4. RB

    RB Founding Member

    Jon, I did a quick read focusing on the new material mostly.

    1. Is a citizen entitled to a full trial, to include the benefits of discovery, witnesses, and a jury, as of constitutional .....as of or as a?

    2. In your brief you say you reside in Florida but the address at the beginning of the brief is not Florida.

    3. The Courts of Appeals have had no trouble agreeing that § 46110 should be read "broadly" or "expansively."

    top of page 9 have had or perhaps has had?

    Good luck, from a non-lawyer it reads well to me. 

    
     

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